In our world as many problems.How nature so and social.For example: our world very suffer from pollution, global warming,deforestation and endangered animals-it is nature problem.Also our world have a social problem.For example racism,uneployment and homelessness.To start I want tell you about nature problem.I want to tell you about disaster in Haiti.Earthquake in Haiti destroy most of the buildings.The earthquake has affected three million people.Thousands have lost their lives or have lost their homes.Except earthquake in world many different nature disasters: drought, flood, forest fire, tornado,tsunami, hurricane.It is very terrible.Now I want tell about social problems.In Africa many hunger children.Hunger is one of the most common social problems.Also in our world many poor people.Poverty very common in Africa and Asia.But I think the most seriosly problem it is war.But do not forget about endangered animals.It is very seriosly problem.So many pink river dolphin die from polutted water.Gorillas die of destroyed their habitat.Please people don't polluted our world!!!!!
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